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Never Enough Time
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
It is so sweet Remembering your face~ How happy you looked Walking into my embrace. We have been apart So long it seems~ Living on memories Loving in our dreams. I wish that we were together You and I in our bed~ Talking and loving and Planning ahead. You look up at the stars I gaze up at mine too~ We dream under the same sky But I am so many miles from you. To hold you and kiss you Is what I need to feel glad~ But living on memories Makes my heart feel sad. I can’t wait until In ecstasy we embrace~ To hear your wonderful voice And to see your sweet face. Until then my darling Remember this true~ Here with me or far away I’ll always love you. ©2000~CJB~ ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ [This message has been edited by MagnoliaBlue (edited 07-09-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I know, Magnolia-there never is enough time, is there? I can relate to this so well. You did a beautiful job here. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was very nice, heartfelt, loving. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
How wonderful,,, but only if he feels the same way too.. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Elizabeth, KitKat and Prometheus... Thank you for your comments...they are appreciated. Prometheus, He does indeed feel the same way...we have been in love with each other for two years!  Thanks again! MBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
MagnoliaBlue, a wonderful heart felt poem. Even when loved ones are seperated, I believe a part of them remains with you. Really enjoyed reading this piece "The stars will explode in the sky O but they don't, do they? Stars have their moment and then they die" Nick Cave |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, MagnoliaBlue......... Sooooo wonderfully said....... You captured love's sweet yearning, and made me remember the ache of waiting. Well written.... much enjoyed! Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~ |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Brian and Sunny..Thank you for taking the time...I am happy you enjoyed it You are right Brian, even separated, a part of them are with us! Sunny, you have experienced the ache of waiting too...I hope that is in the past for you! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Like waiting for Christmas as a child and beginning the countdown Dec 26th, magnified 1000000 fold!!! Beautiful work MBlue, I can feel the ache of the wait through your words~ |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Funky themed fantsy piece this one, loved it, and the ending worked so well . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sigh, I know this feeling! Long distance relationships are very difficult and the only good thing about them is planning the next time we can be together again. Nicely written! Corinne |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
You go MaggieB!!  You guys will be back together again soon...after all, he has to keep coming home to get his tanks filled!  I know, I am sooo bad!  Gossamerwings ;) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey MB you got the distance and the hurt right down exact. I'd say a great piece of writing. Especially when the reader can get lost in the story like this one..... take care ...ethome |
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