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Lorina
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since 2000-07-05
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0 posted 2000-07-08 03:39 PM


Things went wrong
I know
But the momories of the past
Do we have to let go
Am I the only one
Who feels like this?
Or do you, too
Miss my kiss
Do you think of me
When you sleep at night
About how we lost everything
In just one silly fight
Are you feeling blue
Because your heart hurts

Now you've changed
This I can see
Cuz the one who lies with you
Is not me
Everytime I see you
It's like you've lost that twinkle in your eyes
It makes me feel bad
And I try hard not to let you see me cry
Even though we're not together
And forever didn't last
This promise I will keep
I will never regret, forget, or deny
Our memories from the past


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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-07-08 03:58 PM


you've expressed a universal emotion that it is so hard to let go. I would like to see more of your writing.

Kathleen

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
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2 posted 2000-07-08 04:19 PM


very nice poem Lorina.



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-07-08 07:32 PM


Lorina~
Welcome to the greatest family on the web.
Enjoy your stay with us ... we will enjoy having you here.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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