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Open Poetry #8

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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-08 02:41 PM

In silent nature calls me
To dreams I need.
Visions of whom
I once meant to you.
You dream of all good beyound
And hope for best
Though you fight your own knowledge
That your heart invests.
In silence I am complete
The need of me
The show of life I cannot forge
So death becomes my sword.
The dance of the trees that laugh
Make dizzy my fate
Embrace the coolness of this place
Once forgiven splendor is made.
And one last breath in vegence
Made cruel by my hope
Of heavens lost and none other
Than hopes last kiss for love.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-07-08 03:04 PM

In silence I am complete
The need of me
The show of life I cannot forge
So death becomes my sword.
The dance of the trees that laugh
Make dizzy my fate
Embrace the coolness of this place
Once forgiven splendor is made.
And one last breath in vegence
Made cruel by my hope
Of heavens lost and none other
Than hopes last kiss for love.
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beautiful sad poem
memories and traces of love left behind and lost
well written and expressed emotions,
i really like the way you write.
jm

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

2 posted 2000-07-08 03:11 PM

Beautiful and heart-wrenching poem.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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