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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2000-07-08 01:43 PM




It's Saturday--I want to run outside and play....
I think I'll go explore the newness of the day....
Just like I'm 10 years old and running free into
              the wind.........
It's Saturday--we both can run, my friend......


It's Saturday--I think I'll watch my flowers grow!
I think I'll go barefoot and liberate my toes.....
I'll lay down in the grass and watch the clouds
              float right on by..........
It's Saturday--complete with summer sky!


It's Saturday--A gift to all who dream like me....
A perfect day to close our eyes and dream for free..
Let's take today and make it one without the
               slightest care........
It's Saturday--Go On!--I'll meet you there.......


Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-07-08 01:54 PM


Charming...!
Jamie
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2 posted 2000-07-08 02:31 PM


Not to mention the morning cartoons!
Very nice

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Dusk Treader
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3 posted 2000-07-08 08:29 PM


Indeed a charming poem.. I enjoyed this much, you caught the spirit of Saturday and a glint of youth quite well  

Abrahm Simons

"Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon

Sven
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4 posted 2000-07-08 09:37 PM


WOO HOO!!!

Can I bring the Captain Crunch??!?!?  

This is a wonderful poem. . . reminds us all that sometimes, it's just fun to let go and have fun!!!!!

Excellent!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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