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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-07-08 01:24 PM


Searching for the plane…..

In the shadow of this purple summer's night
I sense your touch, feel your breath light,
thus comes to me your calming memory,
your love I hold so close to me…

it was a night, such as this
when I held fast to your last kiss
stroked your brow, held your hand
and felt my heart in pain expand…

this space so void, this chasm so black
only in memory do I have you back,
two crystal goblets of wine I pour,
to drink to your memory ever more…

and as I taste this wine, bitter sweet,
the night's summer warmness is replete
and gently into its blackness I will fall
as I search for you in the crimson pall

for although your body is not near mine
I feel you there … through space and time,
there, on a plane, a yet unknown mystery
where your love I long for, to hold to me…

this quest, a life's long pursuit to not be denied
to re-find your love, again be entwined
and I will search, tho tears make eyes blind
there, on that plane that is as transparent as time

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
8 July 2000




Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2000-07-08 01:34 PM


Sunshine.....
            I know you...this brought tears to my eyes.....I felt the need, as life deals it out, to search for lost love......

       This is a very touching piece, and
   I also feel it's very private in it's
   emotion.....

         Thank you for sharing with us....


Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-07-08 01:51 PM


Sunny, a kind response, thank you. Do you know me? Sometimes I would want to know myself, I'll check in with you to see what insight you might give me...{~,^}

Again, a warm welcome to Passions. I hope you enjoy your time here...I have, for a year now...and more so, every day...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


doreen peri
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3 posted 2000-07-08 01:57 PM


Lovely verse, Karilea! And it struck home with me today.... enjoyed this very much!
Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-07-08 02:04 PM


Doreen, now that I know I pulled you in, my day is complete...thank you for letting me know that this touched you...
Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 2000-07-08 02:50 PM


Karilea,
I am exhausted...exhausted in finding words of praise that could be deemed even close to equal to the amazing, beautiful work you do with your poetry....

I stand here in my watchtower, awed... lost for words...

regards, sudhir

Jamie
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6 posted 2000-07-08 02:54 PM


Give me wings, that I might catch my love which has taken flight.
I love this.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-07-09 09:21 AM


Sudhir, not only do I read your lovely words, I am touched by them...

Prometheus, your comment alone is something you would build upon, and I look forward to seeing what you might do with those very words...

thank you both...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Rex Allen McCoy
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8 posted 2000-07-09 11:38 AM


beautifully penned and so full of desire

Rex

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