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Bounce Me On A Whisper |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Bounce Me On A Whisper ~*Marge Tindal*~ Dance me across the moonlight of a soft sultry summer eve Take me beyond the starlight as gently as you please Bounce me on a whisper of gently blowing breeze Echo my remember through the sycamore trees Wrap me in melodic trill with bird songs of the night Dapple me with dewdrops moistured with delight With the rising of the rays held in the sun of morning Bounce me on a whisper of new love dawning ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wonderful Marge, With the rising of the rays held in the sun of morning Bounce me on a whisper of new love dawning your words are a glowing ray into this cloudly day. Thanks.  "Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a treasure Marge ... even the title had me smiling! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What a lovely thought, Marge...... I like your style....... Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Marge, you knew I would smile at this one! {~,^} Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
As usual another masterpiece from you...I love the phrases you use...just awesome!!!  Julie :) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Simply Lovely phrases. Makes you want to get up to greet the early morning sun. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wrap me in melodic trill with bird songs of the night Dapple me with dewdrops moistured with delight ENJOYED THIS A LOT.... regards, sudhir... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
absolutely one of your best, marge! enjoyed this very much! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Marge, I enjoyed this so much. What a phrase and what a wonderful way of expressing it. You took a word that is so often used in poetry "whisper" and made it something special! Kathleen |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Quietly fantastic, Marge. Shhh....*silence*...ok, next beautiful whisper please!!! *uproarious applause*...when you post a whisper like this, don't expect things to stay quiet around here!! A wonderful poem, Marge!! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrianM~ To spread a little sunshine is a good thing. Kit~ Thank you - it just 'whispered' to me. So pleased you enjoyed it. Sunny1~ Thank you so much. Karilea~ I am glad it caught your smile. JulieAnn~ Appreciate your letting me know you like it. Prometheus~ Pleased to have you greet the dawn on a 'whisper'. Sudhir~ I am so pleased that you found it to your delightment. Doreen~ Tickled that you like this little morsel. Kathleen~ This one was 'whispered' to me from a sweetheart of a little muse. Lil' Lizzie~ What a delight to share such a cute little whisper with you. Like I told you - those little romantic muses were keeping me busy.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Softly sweet! This sounds expectantly happy... Dance me across the moonlight of a soft sultry summer eve Take me beyond the starlight as gently as you please Thanks for the smiles! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Bounce me on a whisper of gently blowing breeze Echo my remember through the sycamore trees psst... i love whispers. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I adore this.... That's it. Simple. K |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Marge, now this is beautiful! It flows so well and gives the reader a sense of peace. Your words are amazing in this poem. I loved the last stanza Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful Marge! Well done again. "Bounce me on a whisper of gentle blowing breeze." That is so tender and beautiful! I love it! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MagnoliaBlue~ Glad to spread a little smile. Thank you.MarkB~ Psst ... me too ! Kamla~ I love ya', gal ! Melissa~ Just a little cutie whispered by a very romantic muse. Thank you. ETHome~ I just love it - cause you love it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Oh, I bet that is an exquistite feeling to be bounced on a whisper!! What a great line and wonderful poem. Love this!! Lone Wolf Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, what a beautiful whisper! Once again, you have created another keeper! |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
You always seem to come up with the greatest verses Bravo to you with a standing ovation |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Thank you, hon. This one just softly landed in my inkwell. Eloise~ My friend, I thank you for a delightful reply. LadyWeb~ I sure do appreciate the sweet reply from you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
The most beautiful imagery here Marge...and a most delightful read Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thank you for your sweet comment. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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