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JulieAnn
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-07-07 02:40 PM



out of the blue I saw you
watching me
you heard me talking
watched me walking
saw me cry
heard my sigh
out of the blue
you saw me
catch your eye
quickly
i look away
out of the blue
you came to me
in your eyes
desire i see
out of the blue
you showed me
how to love
you loved her so
you told me
know you must let go
out of the blue
you held me close
time stood still
out of the blue
you captured my heart
stealing into the night
out of the blue
you left
out of sight
not out of mind
out of the blue
I beg you
please be kind
return my heart
my peace of mind....


Julie :)



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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-07-07 11:28 PM


Great work, Julie. I liked the last two lines.

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



CocoBaci
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2 posted 2000-07-07 11:32 PM


Very nice indeed ... brought a tear to my cheek!

Beth
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3 posted 2000-07-08 02:33 AM




Every time i read another of your poems I find more that i enjoy...you truly have a
talent and use it perfectly...

Blessed Be,
Beth

JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
4 posted 2000-07-08 01:42 PM


Elizabeth~~~~Thank you for your kind reply...

CocoBaci~~~~~Didn't mean to make you cry...sory   glad you enjoyed thanks for replying....

Beth~~~~ You are too kind.....you also have a gift....I haven't read all of yours as of yet but I will.....Thank you for your kind words!!  

Julie :)



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