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My Baby
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My Baby |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma 
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MY BABY I walk out to your room Gently open the door Playfully gave upon you Sitting quiet on the floor I stand impatiently Biting my bottom lip Baby are you ready To take a little trip We climb into my truck Off for the whole day To some secluded spot Where I can have my way The rush now it has me Taking over my mind it seems I give you just one kick I love to hear you scream Gripping you so tightly You know I won’t let go Off into the trees Time to start the show Almost to much to handle My arm begins to pump Fighting it I goose you Oh so high you jump Now down on the ground Keeping you at bay Terror fills the forest As you try to pull away I move higher up on you Holding you against your will You can see it in my eyes How I love the thrill Taking you back to your room Stroking you once more Exhausted you take your place Just where you were before Should any man come wanting you I’ll tell him to take a hike For far too much I love you My baby My dirt bike A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
That must be one HOT dirt bike. Like your sense of humor and your creative writing! Nice work! dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Danny- Thank you for your reply. This poem was written just for laughs. But anyone who knows me, knows about "my baby", and the ones that have seen her will tell you she's definetly not bad!! A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Wow!!! I need a bike like that! Where can I get one do you know?? LOL This was great! For a moment I wasn't sure what was going on when you said: I move higher up on you Holding you against your will You can see it in my eyes How I love the thrill I thought to myself, Oh my gawd!!! A RAPIST!! LMAO! Nah! he can't be! Is he? Nah he can't be. LMAO!! Great imagination and great writing! I loved it!!!  kat |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
A rapist huh!! Oh no... I didn't realize the poem had that effect. But since you pointed it out, I can see why that verse would make you go hhhhmmmmmmmm... LOL In any event, everyone can trust me. I assure you I am quite harmless.. Glad you enjoyed it kat!! A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
wow that one actually scared me at first i thought u were gonna kill a real infant that was great though & i feel releaved!! |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
WOW!! From rapist to babykiller! LMAO Really have me guessing what's next! LOL I did write this poem for a laugh, and boy oh boy, am I ever getting it.. Thank you all for your replies. A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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