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Beth
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since 2000-07-06
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WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-07 06:20 AM




I laid in bed last night
And thought of you
I turned off the light
And knew it was true.

It wasnt in a dream
And it wasnt a lie
It was real life
I could almost die.

I thought I'd gone to heaven
God had come for me
But in the end I just had to open
Open my eyes and see.

You really are real
I can open my heart
I can really feel
And make a new start.

Thankyou Scott for opening me
I know we are going to last
You and me.

You will never know how
much i care,
I have all the love in
the world to share.

And try to remember this
my sweet,
You are the one who makes
me heart beat.


~I wrote this poem for someone who I thought I cared for but in the end I didnt even know him~



© Copyright 2000 Cherie - All Rights Reserved
Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-07 06:25 AM



Sorry to everyone out there....this poem was accidently posted twice...

Blessed Be,
Beth

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-07-07 07:14 AM


I think we all have given our heart and soul to someone we though we could trust and then have it thrown back at us all in shreds.  Looks like Scott didn't appreciate the finer things in life.  Hope you find that special someone soon.  Nicely written.
vandana
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3 posted 2000-07-07 11:36 AM


How sad!!!!!!!enjoyed it!!!!
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