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Ann
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since 2000-07-07
Posts 64
Australia

0 posted 2000-07-07 05:11 AM


Soft grey hair frames her face
Reminding my of ebony and soft white lace.
Eyes that reflect her bottomless love
And kind like angels sent from above.

Vulnerable and sensitive my mother is
Sweet, her kindness shows in each kiss.
Worrying about her children, her family and others
Like countless legions and generations
Of other mothers.

Her beauty is timeless, her integrity is strong
I hope i'll know her my whole life long.
Such strength, courage and in her face does shine,
How I hope you have a mother like mine!  


© Copyright 2000 Ann - All Rights Reserved
Beth
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since 2000-07-06
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1 posted 2000-07-07 06:04 AM



Integrity, passion, and respect....I think your poem was brilliant. You obviously have love for your mother that you hold dear to your heart and that is something to be admired....

Blessed Be,
Beth

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2 posted 2000-07-07 07:44 AM


Ann~
Welcome to this wonderful family of passionate poets and friends.

Anyone who brings her mother along for the first visit ... is welcomed into our hearts.
A lovely render.
~*Marge*~


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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-07-07 07:55 AM


Welcome to Passions.  What a great one to start with in your new family of friends.  "Mother" where life itself begins. Look forward to reading your works.
redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
4 posted 2000-07-07 03:22 PM


realy, what a lovely poem for mothers, and welcome,
i loved the first lines so much, so decriptive.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
5 posted 2000-07-07 07:07 PM



A well written and descriptive tribute to your mother.  I, too, adore my Mom.  This has my vote  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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Nan
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Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
6 posted 2000-07-07 07:23 PM


This is a wonderful tribute to you mother, Ann - and a great entree to Passions... Welcome to our cyber home, and check your email for a special greeting..
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