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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-07-07 05:06 AM


Somewhere
........in the darkness
I see a speck of light
The light reflects
.........hope, chance
an escape

So I wait
For the chance to take flight
I sit
.....and wait for the chance
And when I know the time is right

I'll fly
.........away like a bird
Never again
.........to be seen or heard

That is the beauty of silence



Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-07-07 05:45 AM


yes, yes, yes...meditation here...perfectly portrayed.
lucky
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2 posted 2000-07-07 06:54 AM


trace,

Ha ya kiddo, my lids are falling over me eyes. I'll get back to you in the morning kay. Looking forward to that e - I'll give you an update on the home front here. I like this little piece. Says allot. Shows heart. Sending love and prayers...

Always, Dale


Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2000-07-07 07:06 AM



Tracie*
So soft and tender, you had me floating
right along with you.  Beautiful work~

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-07-07 07:22 AM


Tracie~
I love the bird on wing ...
but I'd miss her little song
Could you possibly sing
as you fly along ?

Lovely thoughts, my friend.
I love the beauty of your thoughts.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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5 posted 2000-07-10 03:38 AM


Serenity~
You got it girl  
Thanks sweet one
Tracie~

Hello buddy  
Thanks for reading and for your most wonderful reply
Take care Tracie~

Little Butterflies~
So glad you enjoyed this one so much  
Keep flying little one
Tracie~

Marge~
...and I yours sweet friend  
Thanks so much
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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