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Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-07 01:57 AM


If you look beyond religion today,
You may
Just see what life is going to pass
your way.

You don't have to live life by so many rules,
God did'nt mean that.
He wants us to use his words as tools.

You shelter your life like a sin,
But if you open it,
Your life will finally begin.

You can't just make a stand,
And then think
You can make any kind of demand.

Life doesn't work that way,
Even if your worried
Worried that you wont go to heaven one day.

Your only lying to me and you,
Are you sure whats in your heart
is true.


© Copyright 2000 Cherie - All Rights Reserved
JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
1 posted 2000-07-07 02:02 AM


welcom to passions...I really liked this...I have one with a similar meaning called hipocrisy.....I will repost it...i think you wil enjoy it...i know your gonna enjoy this site as much me!!! Great poem i will look forward to more form you...

Julie :)



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