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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Tell me what i'm doing tell me that it's right tell me that here is where i should be tonight maybe I should go home but there I feel oh so alone getting carried away in your arms the look in your eyes your extraordinary charm your smile captivating freezes time lying here meshing feels so sublime was it shelter from the storm that led me to your door? just one night leaves me wanting more the light of the day we go our separate ways then he called said you had gone asked me if i knew where, you hadn't said, I told him then disappearing act gone without a trace leaving me with the memory of your face is it a game you like to play? note on your door said you'd be back someday uncertainity fills my mind i hope someday you in my heart I will find...... Julie :) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JulieAnn...its never wrong to love...we may not always do it wisely but just think what life would be without it |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) What a ride this was.......to want something so badly even though it may be wrong..... passion, comfort.......love. The only thing that it doesn't give is satifaction~ A heart tugging piece with so much feeling, great work~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
As Paula said, it is never wrong to love, just the ones we choose to give it to may not know how to appreciate it and that is the saddest part. Hope you find that someone soon. You write from the heart well and deserve only the best. |
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