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Forgiveness
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio 
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hey used to play this game of please and no and he'd beg and she'd try not to smile and it was hard not to feel. She'd sit in the middle of the room and sometimes he'd drop down to his knees and after awhile she'd always say I forgive you, even when there was nothing wrong. those games, I hated playing--- I was once the switch to a human blender and I laugh now but I didn't then but I remember them... and now, all the things he must be asking her to forgive. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very deep...with a lot of hidden meaning...leaves me wondering....very good poem though!  Julie :) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I was once the switch to a human blender and I laugh now but I didn't then but I remember them... and now, all the things he must be asking her to forgive. thanks for sharing. alot of apin in those above images, I hope everything is ok.  "Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
Thanks guys for the posts. I need to get off of this kick of depressing poetry, what do you think? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Perhaps. . .but sometimes you need to go through that "depression" period to get to the good stuff. . . Excellent poem. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Blondie you know what they say...girls just want to have fun...so get out and have some fun and enjoy life...you've had enough hurt and pain and depression for a while...so have some fun and write about it...James |
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