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Angel`Fox
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 32
Ottawa, Ontario Canada

0 posted 2000-07-06 11:43 PM



Stay?

Will our love stay?
Can it withstand the test of time?
Do you understand what you mean to me?
Do you know how much I adore you?
Can you comprehend what I am saying?
Don't want our love to fade away
I don't want to see us apart and gray
Can you see what you mean to me?
You drive me oh so crazy
With your sweet touch
I just want to be with you
It's unbelievable how I feel
Never thought this could be
You're the only one for me
Will our love stay and be true
You're my wish come true
Yes!! Our love will stay, unconditionally
No matter what happens
Our love is here to stay
By the grace of god from up above
He will grant us our genuine love
And give us wisdom along our way
Yes My love it is true we are together
Forever and a day…..

Angel`Fox
7:48pm
July 6, 2000


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"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"



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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
1 posted 2000-07-07 02:20 AM


Sounds like my ex husbands last words to me......oh so sad...i hope yours works better than mine...maybe someday i will findn it too!! great writing!!  

Julie :)



tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-07-07 05:26 AM


Lovely poem
I too hope it works out the way you hope
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-07-07 09:53 AM


Ahh...the questions of love.  Hope it all works out for you and it lasts a lifetime.  Good read this morning.
Jamie
Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
4 posted 2000-07-07 11:44 AM


Wishing you the best,
Hope for better than the rest

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Angel`Fox
Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32
Ottawa, Ontario Canada
5 posted 2000-07-07 12:29 PM


Thank you all!!

I also hope it works out *sighs* if not well theres goes My heart   hehe again!!

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