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Perfect imperfection
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Perfect imperfection |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
He's perfect in the morning his eyes still heavy with sleep His beard rough and ragged dark against his cheek. He's perfect at midday after working in the yard With sweat upon his body and dirt smudged across his face. He's perfect in the evening fresh and ready for some fun With laughter lighting up his eyes He's perfect in the nightime held close upon our bed Sharing pleasure and passion till the morning sun. He's perfect in my eyes in my heart and in my soul My partner, my soul mate my lover...my own |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
what a wonderful feeling you have expressed here... Liked this alot!!  [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
You must truly love this person a lot!! Very well done!!! Thank you!!! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
How perfect this piece is As I sit and read with a grin How perfect it made me feel To wonder of love like this again How pefect the love behind it May it always glow so bright How perfect is the one who wrote it To love with so much light ~Paula, I truly enjoyed reading this, again and again! Very well done Ma'am < !signature--> ~Sheri [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JulieAnn...its always good to have you read my stuff...you are always ready with a kind and encouraging word. Bustem57...He is the light of my life. Irie....thank you...and it is the most wonderful feeling. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Why thank you my dear.  So happy you have overlook all my flaws,or at least accepted them.[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Paula* What a wonderful piece! Yes the everyday things can be beautiful when hazed with love there is nothing better than that! Excellent work~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
eye-catching title...attracted this reader, eager for the read...touching sentiments here...to love a person unconditionally...how forgiving and blessed you must be now!!!  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...you are flawless love. Butterflies...thanks kaile...loving him makes it all worth while |
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