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Drenching My Soul |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Drenching My Soul ~*Marge Tindal*~ In remembered realm of ecstasy you fell so gently into me Like rains upon the sun-parched ground drenching me in soft surround Splashing spray of moistured need caressing every limb of me Droplets clinging to my soul flooding now to overflow Rivulets gathering momentum sliding silently down the pane Muddles of puddles I release pooling there in fallen pain Lost in the memory of you Drenched to my very soul As returning memories cascade I simply lose control |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Marge* Those memories do it everytime...just like your poetry does to me. This is an amazing piece...one of my favorites to date...I of course reserve the right to update this as you continue to post  Exquisite weave ofsteam and longing~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ You never cease to amaze me with your flow of words. THe imagery is beautiful my friend. I can almost feel the rain on my skin . . . Lone Wolf Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
The memories to send the heart and soul reeling, you've captured it well. Yet another beautiful piece from you that I enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ I know the 'memories' touch you ... and I'm pleased that they do. You are just wonderful. LoneWolf~ The heart just doesn't know when to run for cover, huh ? Thanks, my friend. Gemini~ I do appreciate your replies. Thanks for enjoying. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
so lovely magre, you always write such pretty images, thank you for your words Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the idea of a speaker wallowing in sorrow while heavy rains fall is almost clinched but you have done it very well here Breath-taking poem,Goddess of Love Poetry! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Marge, this is darned near perfection...what beauty, what sorrow, what vivid imagery and emotion....you are indeed the Goddess of Love Poetry!  *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Memories are sometimes all we have.....excellent poetry as usual....  Julie :) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your words are a much-needed soothing hug t'nite...thanks marge, love ya back muchly. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Marge, Was that a dream..? This is a little (lot) out of your ordinar' You been out in the sun to long or what..? Nice...  Dale |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ A soul drenching hey....if this is what it does to you....I want to be drenched too  Loved it Marge Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Marge, your soul is drenched with memories and your poetry is drenched with perfection!!! Love ya...and this beautiful poem! Love and hugs, Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RedHeartAngryBraids~ Thank you, little poet. Kaile~ Thanks for the 'crown' ... The overcoming was a 'rain' of tear-drenched memories ... The weather report will follow. Krista~ Awww ... you're such a sweet person to think it so. JulieAnn~ Appreciate the reply my dear. Serenity~ Love those *hugs* ... right back to ya'. Lucky~ Not ! Tracie~ Thanks always for the sweetness of your replies. Knowing how much you enjoy is a pleasure to me. Lil' Lizzie~ So sweet you are ! My little friend, I love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lost in the memory of you Drenched to my very soul As returning memories cascade I simply lose control Memories are the one thing that can somtimes compare to the feeling of love. Ain't they great. love your artistry.  [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-07-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ Thank you for the sweetness of your replies. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ah Marge...those memories. And how beautifully you capture the essence them. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Thanks for the reply and for sharing your beautiful poetry here. You have blossomed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
As always Marge your poetry touches me. You amaze me with your gift of writing and creating such images in my mind. Your words are like a picture painted upon canvas. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow! Marge, the imagery in this is fantastic, yet so sweet and lovely and sensual...just melting it is. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ Gosh - thank you so much. Glad to 'paint' for you. Martie~ Hey, gal ! You know that I'm glad you like it ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 07-09-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks to you for enjoying. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lost in the memory of you Drenched to my very soul As returning memories cascade I simply lose control .... Wonderful work as always, Marge.. so fluent... so delightful... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ I'm really pleased you liked the flow of this one ... it was a pleasure to write it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, I love this poem Marge, I some times just can't give a reply that would be good enough, so I love you, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I'm a huge fan! Nobody remembers the way you do. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Sweetie - your 'I love you' is more than enough. Jan~ Thank you so very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Marge, you've once again drenched us with another excellent display of poetry. If you ever publish your work, I'll be sure to buy it! Nathan |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Nate~ What a marvelous compliment to boost a lady's morale. I hope to someday hold you to that ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I'd love to be a raindrop Fall on you and wouldn't stop Down your forehead, off your nose To your chin my trail goes. Down your neck and out of sight Through the valley of delight Then around the belly button Screaming loudly "All or nuttin'!!" Here I come! Oh, no! Wait! Wait! The heat made me evaporate!!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ If it were raining drops of you I swear this is what I would do I'd run to the nearest umbrella shop shreiking "Make it stop ! Make it stop !" Then if that didn't suffice I'd beg the weatherman, oh so nice - Please send me the hot, hot sun to send this 'raindrop' on the run ! But then of course we all know it's really windy when you blow. No chance that you evaporated - Your dry-spell is quite overated. Get your meteorological ducks in a row and chances are wherever you go the sun will come out and really shine and that's the end of this little rhyme ! Speaking of the belly button I get to push yours for 'nuttin' !  MY PLEASURE ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I echo what so many have said above Marge ... simply beautiful, very lovely indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Make it stop? Make it stop? Send this raindrop on the run? Marge! We used to be so close  My raindrop has turned into a tear |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Thank you, hon. Now excuse me while I rain on Balladeer's parade ! Like said - I get to push yours for 'nuttin' ! Nice to know - IT WORKS ! LOL ! ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
WOW! Simply awesome Marge! I'm saturated. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Marge, this one is pure perfection. I loved everything about it. "Lost in the memory of you Drenched to my very soul As returning memories cascade I simply loose control" My memories do that to me when I think of someone. "sigh" You've expressed it so beautifully! I always love your work. Thanks for sharing it with us. kat |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, this is exquisite poetry. You always write in such a way that your poetry is felt, not just read. This one is great. Thank you for your remarks under my post "Your Angel of Love", just lovely, but only noticed it today Love ya Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Oh, you're so sweet ... what a lovely comment. Thank you. Kat~ Thank you for loving what I do. I do enjoy sharing. Elizabeth, my friend~ You know this heart very well. The goal of every poet is to make you 'feel' ... it pleases me to know that I can take you there on my thoughts. Thanking you for all we've shared. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
a drenching from recalling a drenching. what a nice poetic touch. well done, Marge. well done. thanks. Rick |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Gee, Marge, seem's I'm stuck in the mud way down here on the bottom rung...don't know what I can add that's not already been said so I'm just gonna thank everyone for saying it for me...THANKS, YA'LL!! jwesley *APPLAUDS*, Marge. [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ram~ Hey there ! How nice to see you in here. Thank you for the reply. I appreciate it. JWesley~ LOL @ the 'mud' ! Thank you for the cute reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge I definately read this when I first saw it so don't know why I didn't tell you how great I think it is. A real gem, and like a gem in a perfect setting this sparkles beautifully. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ Taking a respite at work and thanking you for your pleasant comments. So glad you enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
 This is an amazing poem!! I love it!!!! It expresses sooo much emotion in such a beautifull way!! Incredable!! I love it up! Keep'em commin : ) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LiLOnE~ Thank you so much for the enthusiastic reply. It warms my heart to know you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful and exhilarating but then again I can expect nothing less from your ever flowing pen. "Out of sorrow entire worlds have been built Out of longing great wonders have been willed They're only little tears, darling, let them spill" Nick |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrianM~ Thank you for expecting 'nothing less' from me. I hope I've got much more to give. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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