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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2000-07-06 08:58 PM


Two loving arms that
   hold me tight
against the coming of
   the night
A tender hand to brush
   away
the cares and worries
   of the day
A honeyed voice that
   calls my name
over and over, but
   never the same
A strawberry kiss from
   my loves own lips
what can be any
   better than this?

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-06 09:36 PM


Paula~

Well ..... maybe a little whipped cream !  

Love it !
~*Marge*~


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-07-06 09:42 PM


ROFL@Marge  There is nothing
more perfect than this Paula...at least none
that I can think of and no place I would
rather be.  Beautifully written~

Paula Finn
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3 posted 2000-07-06 09:45 PM


Marge....LMAO...well heres some whipped cream just for you girl...

Butterflies...its easy to play when you are in love

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-07-07 05:19 PM


Enjoyed reading about A Perfect Cuddle.  You are a lucky girl...James
brian madden
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5 posted 2000-07-07 07:36 PM


really beautiful Paula, loved this. very sweet and sweeter than whipped cream though Marge what about chocolate, that is much better than whipped cream. The Irish kind anyway, you haven't lived till you have tried cadburys chocolate.  

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Jamie
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Blue Heaven
6 posted 2000-07-07 07:59 PM


It would be better if the parties were different...rofl..
Seriously, Very nice.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Paula Finn
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7 posted 2000-07-07 09:58 PM


James...yes I am lucky...the luckiest lady in ther world

Brian...thanks...and chocolate sounds great, although I am partial to M&M's

Jamie...seriously thank you

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