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The smile and the frown
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The smile and the frown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The smile and the frown A frown is a smile turned upside down, An expression of debase. A smile is a frown just turned around, Manifestation of grace. There is a distance between the two The frown has a sense of no And with the slightest turn of cheek A smile turns it to bravo. These simple symbols that we bear In the movements of our face Has a world of difference in its flair, With the smallest grace of space. Language ancient beyond our known The simplest turn around, A statement that we all are prone And the effects are profound. And I'm sure the smile and the frown, Were both invented by a clown. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Seymour, Both so delicately connected, yet so far apart, you described them well my friend. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Smilin' here, Sy.....  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Creatively said, my friend! Your poem made me smile! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Just a'grinning here !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
I've turned this frown  around and I've given it a smile . Well written and I love the way you've described our two most used facial expressions. kat |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
So true and can make the world of difference to those around you as well as how you or they, see your world...up or down, wrinkled or smooth, nothing matches a twinkle or a tear... HUGS |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Has a world of difference in its flair, With the smallest grace of space. Language ancient beyond our known The simplest turn around, A statement that we all are prone And the effects are profound. And I'm sure the smile and the frown, Were both invented by a clown. --------------------- It matters not the time it matters not the place when ever I read your words it brings a smile to my face when ever I'm feeling low and my smile is upside down your poems make it right ... make me smile like a circus clown   later-smile-maker-gator  jm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gemini, Thanks I'll Email you tomorrow. Balladeer, I'll take a smile any time. Marge, Your so easy to please. Kat, A big smile and thanks. RainbowGirl, Glad your smiling. Janet, Enjoyed your little poem. |
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