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Yesterday,today,tomorrow
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Yesterday,today,tomorrow |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
There are three kinds of days yesterday, today, and tomorrow with each one comes a new thought Yesterday is just a memory we all seem to forget trying hard to forget the bad ones wishing we wouldn'y forget the good ones Which dont come often Today I wish would just never come It means another day of getting through hard times and lying to myself That one day I can just lay and rest Tomorrow we may never see who knows whats in store for us to be all I can say is I live everyday of my life just simply trying to be me peace <3 Silent Love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
That is the way to do it. Nothing counts more than the minute we are currently in. Love your pen. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SilentSoul~ 'I live everyday of my life just simply trying to be me' And if I can't be me ... don't want to be anybody else. Enjoyed the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Certainly no one could ask for more or better than "just" you....it's enough work to find out who that is let alone trying to become someone else  Thank you for sharingthis!! |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
welcome i guess sorry in real bad mood right now im glad you liked it though peace <3 Silent Love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Great work!! even though that can be the hardest thing to do sometimes thats what you have to do live for today yesturday is gone and tomorrow may never come very nice poem |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
BRAVO! < !signature-->~*Irie clapping hands*~ This is so true and so well expressed! Very well done Silent Soul and thank you for the eye opener!  ~Sheri [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 07-06-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I think I saw a peak of optomism in here Silent Soul This is a lovely poem, and a very thought-provoking read! I enjoyed this from you a great deal ... keep up the wonderful thoughts and writing ... and just take it one day at a time (tomorrow is like a present just waiting to be unwrapped) Best wishes, /Kit |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
I agree with Kit. I also feel like I saw a hint of optimism here. This is very well written and reads beautifully. I couldn't agree more then with this verse that you've written.Tomorrow we may never see who knows what's in store for us to be all I can say is I live everyday of my life just simply trying to be me I really enjoyed this one. kat |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
Why thanks I didnt think anyone owuld read this one well for now bye peace <3 Silent Love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear |
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