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what’s a missing you poem without at least one tear?
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what’s a missing you poem without at least one tear? |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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if i don’t crawl softly into your thoughts into your missing and wanting then i just don’t if you don’t think at least now and then that it would be nice to hear my voice then you just don’t if the heat we created no longer warms your coldness if your heart doesn’t ache at night for mine to be near then it just doesn’t grabbing the last kleenex and rolling my eyes as i toss the empty box i swipe away the tear that threatens to take a dive and softly curse my lack of control… i look at the time and shrug i guess its time to go home and reluctantly i lock my door |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
what it is, it is... what it isn't, it isn't... what it was, well, that's just what it was... today is today, yesterday is yesterday and everything is everything..usually, except when it's not anything....sucks sometimes, huh? (LOL... don't know if any of that makes sense, but your poem sure did!!) you've said a lot here... yep... but hey, before you toss the box, could you email me a kleenex? *wink* nice work, corozan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
here girl...have one of mine(kleenex) I should own stock in the friggen company by now  and you mean we are supposed to have some self control? oh well...if find the place to get some let me know... great poem girl...you ache is defined in it.. sure wish I didnt relate to it so dang much... take care jm |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Corazon~ My friend, you got more than one tear out of me, dear. I know the heartache, and it tears you up inside, but I learned to take a deep breath, close my eyes, and take a step forward. Every step after that one gets a little easier. Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
If I don't crawl softly into your thoughts when we're apart then I wonder if my presence was ever counted by the keeper of your heart. Enjoyed reading your poem. Nice writing! dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I too share your pain and I have some tears for you. It does hurt I know, but it will turn someday into just a lost memory. Hope the pain leaves you soon. Wonderful, heartfelt words. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
doreen...boy you sure said a mouthful....didn't you? *confused look* no really thanks  janet marie,thank you and yep i think they should changed the name kleenex to "poet's paper" we sure are a leaky bunch terry, i am actually doing better than this poem sounds...it was just one that needed writing to get it out of my head ...thanks danny, wow...that is a thought worth holding on to...thank you much for your comments mark, thank you, and yes it does get better all the time |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Well expressed emotions...and in the sadness I see a little anger...that's good... |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Its so sad...*tear rolls down her cheek* That was really good!Wow! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I guess some words never really came from the heart.. I guess some feelings never really touched the owner's heart.. I guess the aches, the losses and the tears just never touch the memory of another.. I guess words spoken once with such love and care are now forgotten .. I guess it's easiest that way, for some.. As I shake my head...another one bites the dust.. Kleenex shares have gone up by 0.2 (sharing a tear with you and a smile.. HUSG [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 07-05-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I don't know anyone who can say things the way you do, Corazon, and with such clarity..... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corazon~ Sadly ... a great read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
martie, thank you, and yes anger in the right place can give you that need push in the right direction wren...thank you so much, glad that it touched you rg...yep i know...sometimes for good sometimes for worse...but things just don't stay the same...sigh...big hugs and thank yous bal...if you aren't careful with those compliments you are gonna make me think i might be a poet some day marge...thank you...*sad smile* yep, it seems my tear filled poetry is always my best |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Corazon, You are da poet... sad the theme is... but this is a great piece of writing... regards, sudhir |
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