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A Sigh Remembers When
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A Sigh Remembers When |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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A Sigh Remembers When ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sitting alone in thought flipping through memory's pages Wondering where and how you are Haven't thought of you in ages Only every other heartbeat or drop of tear from eye This heart remembers you on whispers of a sigh From deep inside my being the sound of breath expels A sigh remembers when I knew your love so well Somewhere I would hope you are caught within memories of the love we shared as your sigh remembers when ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ What beautiful thoughts..I sigh ~ Just can't get enough of the beautiful writings you possess  Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
*sigh*.......this is beautiful Marge! I remember when...........they always evoke such powerful feelings and you have penned them with excellent grace! |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
"The heart remembers you on whispers of a sigh"...Oh Marge, this is so beautiful. Bonnie |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this made me cry, I guess it hit a little too close to home in my heart. I loved it, I felt it. Wow! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge, You capture this longing of lost love ones so well in a wisp of magical sighs. Corinne |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, I must admit kleenex required on this one you've penned. You seem to have a magical wand when it comes to placing expression of heart into rhyme. Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 07-05-2000).] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
This made me cry.....i just can't describe all the emotions I felt while reading this...excellent writing!!!  Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I remain in awe at the ease you seem to have in touching one's heart. I read all your works and if I don't reply it is simply that I can't find a strong enough praise. You are a wonder. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Awwwww ! ButterfliesDC~ Those *sighs* do it everytime, huh? BSC~ I do so appreciate you. SEA~ No crying allowed ! Well ... may just a little. Corinne~ My friend, I thank you. CocoBaci~ No magic wand - just a tender heart. JulieAnn~ Thank you for your sweet reply. MarkB~ But ... but ... how will I know ? A little will do.Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
I really like this. Lovely!*sigh* ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Many of us can relate to this...myself included. Heartfelt, whistful, and truly lovely to read Marge. Your talent is incredible.  *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah. The saddest and most bittersweet thoughts begin with "Remember when..." Once again you have penned a beautiful piece that touched the heart. |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Marge, another tender touch. Thanks for posting such good poems. I love reading your work.  Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful, Marge.... Everything you make in to poetry has a number one quality: Perfection!! Love and hugs, Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Great poem! A sigh can mean so much....good and bad......happy and sad |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MagnoliaBlue~ See ... there's an epidemic of *sighs* ! Krista~ What a sweetie ! TennesseeAngel~ 'Touching hearts' is a passion of mine. HM3~ Thank you for reading and liking what I do. Lil' Lizzie~ Ahhhh ! The 'perfect' reply. CrazyChick~ *sighs* for every occasion ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ How'd I miss this one?? LOL. Great poem. Those memories will last you a lifetime my friend. Cherish them always. LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Darned if I know ... but you found it. Yep - they will last and last and last. Love ya' gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge-I had to come back and read this again as it has really taken ahold of my being. Yes, I can simply put a so you will know. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
very nice. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AngelGirl~ Nice to see you and thanks for letting me know that you enjoyed this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
lovely lines here,esp like "This heart remembers you...on whispers of a sigh" btw, i have read "Drenching my Soul" and i understand your intentions now...i was mistaken cos of the third line "Like rains upon the sun-parched ground"...guess i should think b4 i comment...LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Thanks for the read on this one. BTW - interpretation is never wrong - only interpretive ! Ah-ha .... tripped over that little simile did you ? You're a jewel and I appreciate you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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