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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Little Sweetheart For so many years I gave my love away and waited for some love to come back my way. Now my heart questions every offer I receive wondering if the love is real or will this be one more disappointment for my heart to feel. Yes it would be safe to say I have doubts and fears when my heart comes into play. Yet I do have an opportunity to explore my feelings and desires once more and see if love sweet love will open up its door. And I do know that it's very healing when you finally accept the feeling that someone cares for you. I understand not all these feelings but I am enjoying every warm and gentle piece of her heart that she has been revealing. I call her little sweetheart and she has once more given me a chance to find some love and share some sweet romance. Such a fine soothing feeling has enveloped my mind thinking that it could be possible for this lovely woman to be mine. So listen up dear heart of mine for I have something to say once again we will take a chance on Love as I warmly and tenderly give my heart away. Jameslee@July4,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 07-05-2000).] |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I love this! Oh so very sweet!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Rupert Evans II Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 13 |
It is so weird to read how you are feeling in the poem of another person. But this is what I see in this poem. It really makes you think. Thanks for sharing. Rupert |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea I appreciate your comments. Rupert this poem is about me and a woman I am falling in love with. It is the thoughts and feelings in my mind and I am convincing my heart to take this journey with me. James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very sweet poem you have here James Coco |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is a very sweet and tender piece you have written here, James. Enjoyed it very much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and you fall with grace SBJ... cant fight it baby...so ya might as well enjoy it ...  tender and sweet poem james much like the poet who wrote it jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is dripping with such sweetness that I could cry! Great poem! Nathan |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Ooooh Yes...It is always worth it to take another chance on love. Congrats for deciding to go with your heart! Great Poem! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, Happy to see you taking that chance my friend. I hope you find the happiness you seek with her. No need to rush . . . you have the rest of your life. Great romantic writing. LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so sweetly romantic James. I love the angle you've tackled this from ... anticipation and the great beyond ... get ready heart, you're falling! Wonderful James!Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Lone Wolf and Kit...I am glad you enjoyed...yes I am trying to prepare my heart..James |
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