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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-07-05 01:36 AM



Two become one.....
I becomes you

Like becomes Love

If becomes when
We become Us

I like you
Becomes I love you

I love you becomes
Forever

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Daniel_vv
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1 posted 2000-07-05 02:01 AM


Circles..... life is full of circles.


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-07-05 02:29 AM


Eyes+2~
I like your way of thinking with this.
~*Marge*~


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Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-07-05 02:38 AM


I love the way you break it down.  It seems so easy that way.  Great read.
Shelby Olivia
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4 posted 2000-07-05 07:33 AM


this is very simple yet so true. i really liked it! thanks.
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