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Still Missing Her
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Still Missing Her |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Still Missing her. She died last night.... and I still miss her. She was my angel, my tomorrow my yesterday. I have forgotten how to cry, how to say that I miss her. ...so I just sit hear running slowly deeper into these shallow words, into my empty feelings. Everything seems so grey; I feel that I'm drowning in the monotonous of pain, that God has left me in ... I'm sorry my angel, I'm missing you so much, I'm sorry.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Daniel, I am sorry for your loss my friend. . .but know that there is no pain so great that it cannot be healed. . . This is superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rupert Evans II Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 13 |
This poem is so touching. You can feel every word like you are the one that has experienced the lost. The pain from the words realy touch your heart |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this poem touches me deeply ... i understand your pain ... i promise it does get easier with time and writing it out like this is part of the healing process... take as much time as you need ... take care, jm ~This Love Wont Leave Me~ This love wont leave me, I still feel you everyday. Your in my every waking thought, Your in my heart to stay. I've cried a thousand tears... just as many times-I've called your name, This love wont leave me, In my soul you remain. I know I am supposed to move on- maybe in time I will. For now this love wont leave me... For now I love you still. Janet Marie 1/27/00 What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DanielW~ 'I have forgotten how to cry, how to say that I miss her.' Your words have shed the tears for you. Tender touching thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Thnk-you to all.... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
First I am sorry for your loss, your heart speaks volumes throughout your poetry, I could feel your pain and love. Very emotional piece!You are very open and expressive with your feelings..thanks for sharing your heart!  |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Thnks again...... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
the title of this poem caught my eye. because a friend of mine passed away almost 2 years ago and still to this day i cant stop thinking about him and crying. i am sorry to hear of your loss. ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
The pain of losing someone runs so deep it can almost numb one's soul. This was very sad and I'm so sorry for your loss Daniel. Thank you for sharing with us! ~Sheri |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very moving poem....loss is hard to take and i am sorry for yours....an old cliche' I know but like they say...wht doesn't kill us makes us strong.....press on my friend...things can't get any worse so you know they can just get better...< !signature--> Julie  [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Thnk-you to all for your kind words.. |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Thnk-you to all for your kind words.. |
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