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Waltz Across My Heart
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Waltz Across My Heart ~*Marge Tindal*~ Waltz across my heart step lightly to the tune of gently playing music inviting lover's swoon Hold me in your arms breathe sighs upon my face Waltz across my heart fold me in your embrace Entreat me to follow the lead that you set Waltz across my heart the music isn't over yet And the band plays on ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LittleCookie Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 55asheville,NC,UnitedStates |
This is too much! I just love dance & love! They go so wonderful together!  ~~LittleCookie~~ :*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
entreat me to follow the lead that you set....what a lovely image |
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Rupert Evans II Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 13 |
Great poem. Dance with me and let me feel the beat of love. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Marge, this is lovely! Mmmm...dancing with the one you love...man, where is Dusk Treader when I need him!? LOL...anyways, this is beautiful work, just like always my friend. *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleCookie~ Thank you so much. Paula~ Glad you like it. Rupert~ Thank you for your reply. Krista~ Thanks, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Been waltzing all night have you, Marge?  This is a lovely poem!!!! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
What a beautiful waltz this is Capturing beauty in full bloom is your forte I feel sweet Marge Lovely poem Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie~ The menagerie of maniacal midnight muses came to call ... but they brought such sweet offerings I just had to stay up and keep them company. Glad you are enjoying ! And you KNOW I love you to pieces. Tracie~ I just love your sweet comments, my friend. So pleased to share this waltz with you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
Romantic and soft. I like the way you write. *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ May I have this dance? I, too, feel the music of the midnight maniacal muses, (even though it is afternoon!) and I don't think I can stand still while this song is playing.... {{{Hugs}}} Thank you, my friend! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, a beautiful dance it is, your words "waltz across my heart." Your talent is amazing Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Another beautiful piece plus it's very romantic. Great job! Nathan |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, you always are dancing with that lovely love...now give some others a chance to cut in, will ya....I feel the beat! I guess you always get to dance 'cause you do it best |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Waltz across my heart Feel this lovers touch Hear the rythym of it's beat Never wanted anyone this much Waltz across my heart Listen to the tune If by chance you have to go Please say you'll be back soon Waltz across my heart And know that it beats true For the one that holds the notes Which happens to be you Sorry Marge, Your words just took me to a beautiful place I had forgotten existed in me |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RinderCella~ Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it. TerryW~ Sweetheart, YES you may ! *Hugging* you right back ! Melissa~ Let's all take to the dance floor. Who can resist a lovely waltz ? Nate~ 'Romantic' is good, yes ? Thank you. Martie~ Okay ... you talked me into it. You lead !  Jeffrey~ Wow ! Hon, I'm here to tell you it DOES exist !! So softly lovely are your phrases. Thank you for that inspirational piece of your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Music to my eyes, sentiments for my heart, and a little "one and two" for my feet! Wonderful Marge! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Nothing like a dance amongst lovers, entrancing and captivating, you captured it well. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Lovely waltz my friend. May the music never cease. Love this one!! LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ I love your 'sentiments for my heart' reply. Perfect ! Thank you. Gemini~ Ahhhh, what a dance it is. Thanks, hon. LoneWolf~ May you dance many a waltz my friend. Thank you for letting me know you like it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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