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All this and more
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All this and more |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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All this and more You are to me a sphere of joy A delight a mischievous toy A wonderland of word and feel An endless stream of love and zeal. The dreams you sell and you expel, Fills my heart like a brimming well. I drink you with a thirsty need And hold you with a miser's greed. You have the softness of a fawn. The freshness of a bright new dawn. The mystery of a starry night. The pleasures of the mornings light. And though we stand upon a stage With all the substance of our age I never could a truer friend And pray it never, never end. Our friendship is a Camelot, So tax me not, a thank you plot. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
To have and to hold....... A beautiful poem. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I drink you with a thirsty need, and hold you with a miser's greed..." Oh sigh, sy...yep... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Prometheus, To have and to hold. Thank you Serenity, Yep, thank you. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh yes.....wonderful!!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is most beautiful Liz |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So lovely, Seymour, especially liked the last stanza. Corinne |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
oh gosh, voting here, this is wonderful  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BSC, Thanks for the wonderful. Elizabeth, Thank you sweet commet. Corinne, Thanks for the read and comment. Corazon, Thanks for the vote. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Beautiful poem...if I could describe it in just one word.....very good.  Julie :) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JulieAnn, Thank you for the one word, very good. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Ah, to be able to write like this, is but a dream. I liked. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy, you write lovely with these words, not to mention romantic and tender and sweet. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
How beautiful are your words, oh Sy, Sir Lancelot of Camelot! Your heart is sincere and romantic! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gemini, Big thanks. Martie, I was thinking of you. Melissa, Flattery will get you everywhere. |
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