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OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

0 posted 2000-07-04 10:40 PM


“Techy” Love

My C.P.U’s in super heat,
My fans been on the blink,
I’m firewalled to perfection,
In my armour not a chink,
Full fractal encryption,
To safe guard my memory core,
I have A.V. protection,
I can do nothing more,
But you invade my  “dial up”,
And my login scripts a mess,
My modems close to “shut down”,
With your amorous address,
You make it clear you want me,
In each avid kilobyte,
Each passing nanosecond,
I lose the will to fight,
You sneak along my routers,
Tell me what am I to do?
My floppy disks a hard drive,
When you whisper “I love you”.


Olias



© Copyright 2000 Mick Yates - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-07-04 10:48 PM


OH YA MAKE ME SMILE TONIGHT OLIAS...
this is so clever and fun...
creative and perfect rhyme ...
love those last 2 lines ...
nothing like Cyber love to blow a few fuses.
great writing
jm

OLIAS
Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
2 posted 2000-07-04 11:11 PM


Glad you liked it J.M. and I'm happy that I made you smile, thanks for your kind reply, my c.p.u's over heating again

regards
Olias

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-07-05 01:45 AM


Big cyber-eatin' grin here...loved it...even though I don't know half of the tech terms--somehow...it's understood...
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-07-05 01:58 AM


This was a great treat.  Almost like the perfect dessert after a wonderful meal.  Fun to read and flowing with the expertise of your pen.  Well done.
OLIAS
Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
5 posted 2000-07-05 01:04 PM


Serenity, a big cyber grin back thanks for your Kind comments, May you always have plenty of cache and your RAM always be volitile.

Thanks Mark, Dessert, I thought it was more chips with everything (oooohh bad pun) sorry,
May you never write in binary and always keep those WINDOWS to your soul open.

Regards
Olias



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