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Sanctuary (Inspired By Janet Marie's Poem)
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Sanctuary (Inspired By Janet Marie's Poem) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~SANCTUARY~ If you fall helpless beneath the winds and rains of life, I will lift you up and be your shelter from the storm If you should find that you are lost all you need to do is turn around and take my hand, I will guide you home If your dreams fall shattered from your mind, I will kneel beside you to pick the pieces up from the floor and give them life again If you ever feel persecuted by the cold, bitter world, I shall wash the lonely tears from your face, and remove your crown of thorns, so that you shall only know joy, today and forevermore If you become blinded by the shadows of solitude, the light of my love will gently caress you to help you see that you are not alone, for, I am here for you If you long to hear a word that is true, just rest your weary head upon my breast and listen as my heart speaks of love for you If you ever need me, just call my name, for, I shall always be your sanctuary *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If your dreams fall shattered from your mind, I will kneel beside you to pick the pieces up from the floor and give them life again If you ever feel persecuted by the cold, bitter world, I shall wash the lonely tears from your face, and remove your crown of thorns, so that you shall only know joy, today and forevermore If you become blinded by the shadows of solitude, the light of my love will gently caress you to help you see that you are not alone, for, I am here for you ----------- Melis, this is simply gorgeous..FANTASTIC!!! very impressive writing excellent imagery and PERFECT expression of emotion... now this is devotion girl ... thank you very much for allowing my words to inspire you... thank you for your reply to my Sanctuary... that was very sweet and an honor to be called someones muse... maybe it will make mine jealous and she'll bring her poetic behind back home LOL  serioulsy tho...this is very well written and thought thru. take care poet-gator  later, What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
oh my gosh, i'm having pms and getting really emotional, this is so beautiful, i have continued my tears from my last read, it feels good to let it out. thank you for your beatiful words, i wish that more people knew there hearts could be this big Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful Melissa, you have a lot to offer. . . I hope that one day, you will find that someone you will be able to give this devotion to. . . and get it back in return. . . Excellent poem my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Melissa, This is absolutely incredible, dear! This touched my heart so much, I can't put it into words. Thank you so much for sharing!! I needed to read this tonight, for you have lifted my spirits beyond the clouds!  Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ You let inspiration lift you ... thanks for taking us along. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thanks everyone for the sweet replies! And thanks Janet Marie for inspiring me Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Excellent poem......lifting someone up when they are down is the ultimate gift of friendship!!! We all need a sanctuary....too many spread themselves thin.....great writing here!! Julie :) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
you become blinded by the shadows of solitude, the light of my love will gently caress you to help you see that you are not alone, for, I am here for you Melissa beautiful poem and we all need a sanctuary. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone for your replies! There are so many poets here who inspire me Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Brilliant sentiments pronounced in most emotional way... Melissa, thanks for sharing... regards, sudhir |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
wonderful,caring words you offer up. Thanks for sharing it |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sudhir and Mark, thank you very much! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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