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My Escape
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My Escape |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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When I feel the world closing in, I close my eyes and dream of you, Holding me in your arms, Arms filled with love so new, I want to be with you, I want to experiance everything with you, You are my escape, My shelter I run to, In times of need, Times of love, Times my heart bleeds, I cry on you, I want to run to you, Just come to where you are, I want to feel your kiss for the first time, feel your body close to mine, You are my escape, My dreams come true, I want to share everything I do, Share my world with you, You are my escape, My comforting thoughts, MY LIFE IS WRAPPED IN YOU, I am a sponge, You are the water, I want to absorb you completely, Someday, someway, I will be there, I will surprise you, When I get the courage to, Run to you, You are my escape.... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Romantic Heart, I awaken today to find this poem you've penned. What a surprise that you've expressed something of which rings true to me. Truly, a weave of poetic rhyme of feelings one posesses inside. This one is close to the heart and I shall keep this one in my library!  Coco |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Coco, We must be going through the same feelings... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RomanticHeart~ I enjoyed the idea of a sponge soaking up thoughts of love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
"I want to feel your kiss for the first time, feel your body close to mine," .... this is beautiful poem! You truly have "A Romantic Heart"! |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Romantic: I can also relate with what you've penned so beautifully on here. I know exactly what you mean when you say "you are my escape" It is an escape when you love someone so much that everything around you disappears and the only thing around is you and the one you are in love with. Everything else just doesn't matter anymore. Very beautiful. kat |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I want to feel your kiss for the first time, feel your body close to mine." You are driving me crazy girl...I have been having these same thoughts about a certain woman I know...but we have shared some kisses and we have hugged and embraced...and she has wet my desires and passion for more...much more... Sweet, soft, and tender desires you have in your dreams...James |
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