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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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0 posted 2000-07-04 03:04 PM


*repost due to all the oh so lovely sensual poems in here of late...
must be the summer heat  

~Sanctuary~

When your world becomes cruel and angry,
when your skies turn dark and gray ...
Always remember I'll be your shelter,
always know in me ... you have a kind place to stay.

Should your load become too heavy,
and you're troubled by the voices in your head ...
you need not retreat inside those walls,
gently lay your tired mind in my healing hands instead.

Find sanctuary ... in my open arms,
when it all gets too hard ... when it all becomes too much ...
Take my hand and come with me,
find safe refuge in my tender, caressing, touch.

My lips to offer quiet comfort,
let my mouth be your remedy ...
Soft kisses to close your eyes,
whispered desires to keep you company.

Let my shoulders take the burdens,
I'll carry the weight so that you might rest ...
Lay your weary body down next to mine,
I'll hold you while you sleep, your head on my forgiving breast.

With in me ... may you finally breathe,
while my body rocks you with a sensual lullaby ...
As you lift up to peaceful pleasures,
the only sound made ... will be our contented sighs.

Janet Marie




What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


© Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-07-04 03:10 PM


your gentle spirit writes again, JM...what a nice surprise as I was taking sanctuary from this steamy 4th in n'awlins...feels like ya just rocked me to sleep...this has a soothing way to it...beautiful, m'twin...
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2000-07-04 03:12 PM


Janet,
What a BRILLIANT poem to repost!!!

regards,
Sudhir

Martie
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3 posted 2000-07-04 03:35 PM


What a beautiful heart you have, Janet, to write with such giving tenderness...love it!
CocoBaci
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Posts 3043

4 posted 2000-07-04 03:43 PM


~ This rhyme is lovely JM ~

Coco

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-07-04 03:48 PM


Oh, Jan, This is so romantic and very sensual and.....words fail me, truly this is a love poem for the ages.. the freely giving to the beloved of ones entire being, is exquisite. Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
6 posted 2000-07-04 08:04 PM


Sweet and lilting J.M. rocking me off to dreamland, loved it, beautiful sentiments thanks for sharing.
Regards
Olias

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA
7 posted 2000-07-04 08:08 PM




Simply beautiful, it just poured from your heart    You've inspired me to write a poem now, see, girl you rock!  

Take care Janet, my muse
Melissa Honeybee  


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
8 posted 2000-07-04 10:53 PM


If you will put  it to music perhaps we can get Barbra Streisand to lend her voice.
Magnificent.
ps.. you have no idea on the Haikus...lol
I must have 15 or 20 on my desk.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
9 posted 2000-07-04 11:17 PM


Janet Marie~
     I remember this one.  And I must tell you, I love it just as much now as I did the first time I read it!  It still takes my breath away, dear!



Love Ya~

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Daniel_vv
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since 2000-06-28
Posts 61

10 posted 2000-07-05 01:58 AM


a beautiful poem....... speechless I remain.
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
11 posted 2000-07-05 03:31 AM


I think serenity said it best, this is so very soothing.  

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
12 posted 2000-07-05 03:36 AM


Sensual words from a heart that knows no bounds.  Excellent one to repost.  Glad I got to see this one for sure.
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
13 posted 2000-07-05 07:05 AM


Oh Janny
I can imagine your santuary being a very safe haven to be  
Wonderful poem and the most wonderful imagery
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

14 posted 2000-07-05 03:20 PM


thank you all muchly....
Im grateful you all enjoyed...
nice to know I can take someones breath away
even if only poetically  
this one was fun to write...
(back when my muse was sticking around to write)
thank goodness for repost LOL
thanks guys...
later
jm


What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
15 posted 2000-07-05 03:23 PM


Janet Marie,
This poem tells so much about you. It is wonderful!. I'm so glad you reposted it
Liz

JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
16 posted 2000-07-05 03:24 PM


Great poem....things I would like to say to someone right now but can't muster the courage......you said it all perfectly as usual!! thanks for posting this...it is just beautiful!!!!  

Julie :)



Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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Ontario, Canada
17 posted 2000-07-05 09:17 PM


Oh my Janet Marie ... absolutely wonderful! Such gentle passion and sensual sentiments ... I could just "hear" the sighs at the closing!  Really well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
18 posted 2000-07-05 10:18 PM


JM,

Such beautiful and romantic writing my friend.  *sigh*  Fabulous.  I think that is what we are all looking for.  Someday you'll find it . . . he's out there.  

LW


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth

Denise
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19 posted 2000-07-05 10:33 PM


Very very nice, Janet Marie!  

Denise

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