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Musicmaker1969
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0 posted 2000-07-04 02:47 PM


I am living variegated
All colours mixed into one
No one shade outshines the rest
Or feels what each has done.

I am red and blue, black and white
I love when love is required
I get sade, sometimes depressed
I hate and I grow tired.

At times I am green with envy
Other's I'm black with rage
Sometimes I'm yellow and shy
Or grey, locked in a cage.

Sometimes I'm pink, feeling so good
Sometimes I'm puple and not
When I'm brown, I'm all confused
And when I'm orange, I'm lost.

When I am blue, I'm feeling down
By so many different thoughts
There are times colours get mixed
And tie me up in knots.

     I Am Variegated.




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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-07-04 03:16 PM


wow..this is a really cool poem
I really enjoyed this read
the theme and metaphor of the colors
for the emotions is creative and cool
and the rhyme is perfect
great writing...
welcome to passions
so nice to meet you
take care, jm

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


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