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Musicmaker1969
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0 posted 2000-07-04 02:43 PM


Inside tremors make you tense
The tension is so strong
The outer shaking makes you weak
It's gone on for so long.

Clouded thoughts that fill your mind
Snap your soul in two
Mixed emotions jab the heart
You don't know what to do.

The aching of your memories
Recalling every time
Rings in your heart like midnight bells
Over and over they chime.



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Martie
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1 posted 2000-07-04 03:18 PM


Liked the sound of this look into emotional termoil.  Well done!
~Enigma~
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2 posted 2000-07-04 03:31 PM


You seem to have a gift for rhyme.
Another great one.

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