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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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0 posted 2000-07-04 07:33 AM


Welcome to my hideout
Welcome to my lair
Come and see whats inside
Come on.....if you dare
~~    ~~    ~~    ~~
You never know what you'll find
Hidden deep inside
Maybe you'll find courage
Tenderness and pride
~~    ~~    ~~    ~~
Maybe you'll find mixed emotions
Battling against the tides
Maybe it's where passion lives
Or destiny abides
~~    ~~    ~~    ~~
It's a place thats hard to get to
It's depth sometimes hard to reach
Maybe you can reach it
If it's code you can somehow breach
~~    ~~    ~~    ~~
Once the code is broken
And you discover whats inside
You'll be pleasantly surprised
Your eyes will open wide
~~    ~~    ~~    ~~
For you have reached my everything
You have reached my core
You've unlocked my hideout
Opened up it's door
~~    ~~    ~~    ~~
Through the door there is a pounding
A heart beating just for you
Capture her take her away
Show her something new
~~    ~~    ~~    ~~
Now that you have reached her
And have her within your sights
Please make her very happy
Show her pure delights
~~    ~~    ~~    ~~
She has been hidden far away
For oh so very long
Now she needs someone to love
To hear the lovebirds song
~~    ~~    ~~    ~~
So make your way through
The jungle you can see
Break the code around my heart
And help to set her free
~~    ~~    ~~    ~~

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Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 07-04-2000).]

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-07-04 08:00 AM


This is lovely, Tracie!!
I hope someone worthy finds the key to your heart.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
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2 posted 2000-07-04 08:15 AM


Hello Lizzie  
Thanks hon
yep he is worthy
Bye
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-07-04 05:33 PM


very cool tracie-girl...
this is GREAT
creative and fun to read...
like the repetative theme
love the presentation
later-cool-poet gator  
jm

What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly
~LaoTzeTao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


~Enigma~
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since 2000-07-03
Posts 44
St Cloud, MN
4 posted 2000-07-04 05:39 PM


Break the code around my heart
And help to set her free


Wonderful.....

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-07-05 01:28 AM


Tracie~
You can't hide from me !

Sweetie, this was just wonderful.
I like the 'happy' in you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
6 posted 2000-07-05 06:42 AM


Janny  
Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked this and it's happy appeal  
Tracie~

Enigma~
Thanks for reading and replying  
Tracie~

Hello Marge wouldn't hide from you hon  
Glad you liked...thanks for your wonderful reply
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

7 posted 2000-07-05 06:52 AM


Tracie, this is absolutely wonderful. Well Done   enjoyed it muchly  

It's been
too many nights
of being with

to now be suddenly
without
"Jewel"

Rindercella
Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64
La La Land
8 posted 2000-07-05 03:59 PM


Really nice.

*If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours*



Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
9 posted 2000-07-05 04:05 PM


Absolutely beautiful.
tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
10 posted 2000-07-06 06:39 AM


DA~
Thanks hon for you lovely reply, appreciate it  
Tracie~

Thanks Rindercella  
Tracie~

A big thankyou to you as well Mark  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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