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Justbleu
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0 posted 2000-07-04 02:25 AM


Frosted trees
White covered peaks
With you I am free
Just alone with you
Is all I dream
Whispers in the wind
Blood rushing through
Deeply in my veins
Captured by your glance
Lost in a trance
Within the romance
You and I in God's dance
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"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 07-04-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-07-05 01:38 AM


Back to the top for you---this is lovely, Justbleu...and it is like that, isn't it?
Justbleu
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2 posted 2000-07-15 12:15 PM


Thank You Serenity....Oh yes very much like that!!  

Bridette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

ma miller
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3 posted 2000-07-15 12:26 PM


Hi Justbleu ...

simplicity is working well in this piece ... directness with beautiful imagery ... thanks.

My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.M.



Justbleu
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4 posted 2000-07-17 03:10 AM


Thank You!!!  I like simple!!!  
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

tracie66
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5 posted 2000-07-17 03:27 AM


Bridgette~
Lovely piece from you...enjoyed it muchly  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Justbleu
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6 posted 2000-07-17 08:53 AM


Thank You Tracie!!!  
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2000-07-17 11:04 AM


Justbleu,
Very nice enjoyed the read.

Justbleu
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8 posted 2000-07-21 11:47 AM


Thanks  

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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