letter to whoever watches over me

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Open Poetry #8

letter to whoever watches over me

julietrose
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since 2000-06-30

Posts 9
pennsylvania...

0 posted 2000-07-04 01:03 AM

To Whoever Watches Over Me...

If I could write a letter to whoever watches over me
I would ask them from there view,
     what all do they see?
Do they see the happy cheerful part?
Or her poor miserable broken heart?
Do they see the pain she is going through?
Do they know what harm she can do?
Do they know who she is?
can they see that her soul is now his?
Can they fix things?
Can you hear the voice in her head that sings?
Keep me safe forever and ever
Don't let my happiness sever

One last note to whoever watches over me:
     Please make sure that in his safe arms i'll
     always be

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~love, JulietRose
-If I was Peter Pan, you"d be my happy thought.-
"See, how she leans her cheek upon her hand!
O that I were a glove upon that hand

[This message has been edited by julietrose (edited 07-04-2000).]

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2000-07-04 01:22 AM

very nicely done ... interesting idea using a letter

LittleCookie
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since 2000-06-28

Posts 55
asheville,NC,UnitedStates

2 posted 2000-07-04 01:25 AM

Oh, how beautiful! It would be nice to have someone always there! ~~Little Cookie~~

:*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul

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