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0 posted 2000-07-04 12:16 PM


This is a poem I wrote about a stuck up doctor.

Drill Sergeant, yelling at your face
Drill Sergeant, listening without trace
Drill Sergeant, assumes he knows it all
Drill Sergeant, is about to fall.

Drill Sergeant, strong and mighty man
Drill Sergeant, is his biggest fan
Drill Sergeant, a head above the rest
Drill Sergeant, thinks that he's the best.

Drill Sergeant, Mr. Know-It-All
Drill Sergeant, answer to his call
Drill Sergeant, uncompassionate
Drill Sergeant, most incompetent.


If you run into him, run or he'll ruin you!!!
He ruined my emotions twice over.


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