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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-07-04 12:31 PM


Winds of crystal billow
Upon October's gold,
Flying towards the silver'd sun
To with the clouds enfold.

Reflections shimmer silently
And 'pon the river lay
Seeking to be understood
By Apollo's pale rays.

Teardrops of the forgotten fall
'Neath the willow's shade
Wishing for a tender touch
Before their light does fade.

Autumn's apparitions soar
Through a boldy painted sky
Yearning simply to be held
And then be free to fly.



*Krista Knutson*

"We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~

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1 posted 2000-07-04 12:33 PM


Alwye~ Autumn is about my favorite time of year. This is beautiful!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



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2 posted 2000-07-04 12:55 PM


Ahh, the autumn poems now? Just summer until Saturday and then you'll be happy, won't you? LOL.  I don't know about you, but I'd rather wait a while before experiencing that explosion of color with ya, my dear.. wonderful poem, sweety, much enjoyed  

Abrahm Simons

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3 posted 2000-07-05 12:14 PM


Thank you both very much.  

*Krista Knutson*

"We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~

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4 posted 2000-07-05 12:40 PM


Krista~
You write with such feeling ...
the thoughts flow through you
straight from your heart.

It is a pleasure to read you.
Beautiful friend.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2000-07-05 03:10 PM


Wonderful poem Krista!  So vivid in my mind!  I love autumn.     There isn't any buggs!  LOL.  I agree with Abe though!  We must wait summer out... at least until my birthday!  Then we can move on.  Great poem Krissa!  

"The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper."
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