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Naked By Buttons |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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Yellow does my eyes to you, dream of white boxes filled with blue. With streams of years flowing in my tears as letting them back to ocean shall be. The tamed button with two. The tamed button with four. The tamed one with a single eye hole. Little lets of flowerets dancing daringly with me. My field of brown and dirt as the ground, holds me infinitly free. The song was sung, and the words they rung to hear my open ear. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just one question---why is this not a book submission? This is incredibly beautiful...again you have painted a portrait of emotion...your best yet...in my humble opinion, of course... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
redheart, I agree with Serenity,why is this not a book submission? Every line is filled with such emotions so vividly. Loved it! Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
had to come back again, (such is my nature) but this is so intensely beautiful...this is poetry making love...I loved it...submit this please... |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank you so much ya'll, i actually got this published in a poetry book on poetry contest.com, i was so amazed, and thankful, if you all think it's okay to submitt this to our book, i would be happy to, though, i don't want to take any room from another poem, for this one to be there, do ya know what i mean, i want to be humble,and thankful to you both so much, just the suggestion is complimentary enough for me, thank you, thank you, love Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RedHeart AngryBraids~ Your phrases carry refreshing thoughts. Enjoyed very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hi there,...not sure that I've caught many of your poems before but I LOVE THIS!!! I really, really love this poem. It's so amazingly the style I love to read,...your wording and *Sigh*,....it's just a really neat one. Take care. *Peace. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
so i really wanted to read the other replys, but i couldn't find them untill i posted a reply, gosh thanxs ya'll, i'm just so flattered, thank you all for taking the time to check it out, thank you, so much, i really needed all the goodness, Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
redheart, are we being modest here?no,no book will be complete without your original unique poetry...i like this very much..paints a picture of tranquil enlightenment and i love these lines: streams of years flowing in my tears my field of brown....holds me infinitely free submit this pls...this just calls out to be included  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yellow does my eyes to you, dream of white boxes filled with blue. With streams of years flowing in my tears I have to agree with the others. It would get my vote. I love your style and the easiness of the flow is perfect. Especially loved the start to this one. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
kaile- yes you caught me,i'm such a dork i know, i'm just so flattered ya know, thank you for your support. Mark- thank you, i have finally entered this, i feel kinda silly, but thanks for the incouragment. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
YEA!!! I'm going vote now! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a wonderfully descriptive piece, really enjoyed it. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Angrybraids - This is terrific, emotion just flows in it. The book thingy isn't there, I'll have to come back to vote for it!!!! Great job. Bonnie |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank you again all, you all are so kind, it's so wonderful, to beable to share my mind with so many awsome and creative people. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I think I've mentioned it before, I love your author's title. Getting back to "Naked By Buttons" it is incredibly well done I just absolutely love it, I really do. I agree with the others it should be a book submission!! |
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