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The Best Haiku You Ever Saw
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The Best Haiku You Ever Saw |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Breathtaking Nature~ Stumbling to write Haiku~ Proud of my born child! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This was properly titled. So well done. Thank ya. *Peace. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Short and sweet, I liked it . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Works for me, my friend  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kaile~ this is definately a nice Haiku! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanks SpitFire, angelswing, Marge and SEA for replying to this so is this the best haiku you ever read?LOL [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey Kaile... I remember reading many of your early Haikus over in DP and the Pub... you've always been good at these.. this one is beautiful.. Im just not good at these... I always say Im too longwinded to be so brief  but actually they are much harder than they look... you make them look easy... and you have inspired many others in here to try them-- which always a cool thing  good work take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful, I like this very much, well done! Olias |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I bow to the Haiku master!! Well done kaile, you have made this form your very own. . .I am always amazed at what you can say in so few words. . . Excellent!! And!! It's the best Haiku I have ever read!! -------------------------------------------------< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
every line is superb, i love it, it's the beat haiku i've ever read, he, he, seriously, sweet one, Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx all for replying...and for humouring me that this is the best haiku you have ever read LOl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
kaile...I do not have the patience to be so brief..and so beautifully too |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I love Haiku.......so beautiful in such an organized space. It's like 'time'....... confined, but free Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Kaile~ I have to agree with everyone here you always pen perfect haikus. A beautiful sentiment, life really is fulfilling when a child is born. And if you are speaking of your own life, congratulations on the birth of your child! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx all for replying Melissa, the born child here actually refers to the haiku i was stumbling to write...thats why it would be the best haiku i would ever see cos that would be my sentiments penned down for all eternity then but i thank you for your interpretation and insight..makes me look at this in a different way thank all again [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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