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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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"The Journey" The reservation has been made The journey is one we must take No set time... No set date... Just part of life we cannot forsake The tickets were purchased long ago By that which we know as fate No set time... No set date... Just a trip for which we must wait The station is in our dreams The journey within our hearts No set time... No set date... Just destiny in which we take part Hold true to the belief in love Doubt not the power it can give No set time... Not set date... Just an appointment for which to live. Mark Bohannan ( For a friend I have yet to meet.) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
may your roads rise up to meet you ... may they be paved in gold, may you live all your dreams ... may you know love ... and all its secrets untold.  ***** excellent Mark.. I liked the repetition in this... made it read like a cool song... liked the hope and promise in it as well... take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
As I was reading I began to think it was about a couple who were "engaged to be engaged"..you surprised me. Good luck and hope you time is soon. Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Janet Marie-Song?...What a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much. Prometheus--Surprise is often good. Thanks for reading and for the wishes. |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Very good writing. Sweet poem.  JM is right.Reads like a song. MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Mark: I loved the way you put this. I can relate to it but in my case, I felt that way months ago. I went ahead to meet that friend and since then I've written many poems because of it. I hope you will meet your friend soon. I know in my case, I'm so glad I did. Beautiful writing Mark! I loved it! kat |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ she's just around the corner, you can't see her, but she's there....waiting for you. Beautiful poem! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I like very much the idea you promote with this poem, Mark...the idea of a journey of fate. Lovely. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I loved the message here. So many of us are "Yet to meet" that......whatever in are lives. Very nice Mark. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
No set date?..sounds like fate? loved your poem or your song! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Magnoliablue-glad you liked it. kat-so happy that you met your friend and thanks for the encouragement. SEA-Actually I believe she has come and gone, but only time will tell. Thanks so much Meadowmuse-thank you for your kind words Marina-I'm glad you enjoyed. A Romantic Heart-Always thrilled to read your words of kindness. Thanks [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
A friend you have yet to meet...will I do? Beautifully written...misleading in a wonderful way |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Paula-Yes my friend yes. I would consider myself greatly blessed by a meet with you. Thank you for reading and replying.  |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
It gave me the feeling of lonliness as I read the last line....HMMMM....there is alot of that going around...surrounded by people...yet still so alone....true love will come...I am convinced!!! Great poem... Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
JulieAnn-Glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to read and reply with such kind words. |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Great expression. Hope you find your traveling companion soon and you have a long and happy jouney together. Anything of value is worth waiting on..... nona |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I know I read this before...perhaps before you wrote it?...ya never know do you Beautiful message within the flowing poetry...I loved this piece~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ Am I ever glad that 'our' LittleButterfly brought this one up ! How prophetically wonderful. *Winking* at the fates that brought two loving people together. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Holly-When it is etched on our hearts how could you not have read it....all I did was put it on paper. Thank you my sweet loving friend. Marge-Thank you so much and I was surprised to see that she had done so. |
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