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Passions Storm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Theres a storm on the horizon drawing nearer...ever nearer Theres a tension in the air as it grows and builds Thunder sends shockwaves and lightening sets the sky on fire Storm swept clouds chase each other upwards There is expectation here... ...anticipation...a waiting time And with a touch you set the storm loose within me Searing my soul...sweeping my heart before the onslauhgt Loving me...loving me... setting me free Free to ride the wind blown clouds As passion explodes in storm swept slendour And you make me your own in the pouring rain |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ YES!!! my kind of storm  Great poem  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Free to ride the wind blown clouds As passion explodes in storm swept slendour And you make me your own in the pouring rain ... Excellent thoughts, Paula, wonderful work. regards, Sudhir |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...you always make me feel good about my writing...thanks Sudhir...thanks its always nice to hear a mans point of view. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Paula, how beautiful it is when love sets us free. Lovely thoughts and images, my friend. I love how you incoporate the image of rain, my understanding that it is cleansing all the pain away. One of your best Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Melissa...thank you some things come easier than others |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh how I do love a good storm. Wonderful imagery. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooohh I just love a good roll of thunder  excellent Paula... love the sensuality in this... rain wont cool this heatwave ... great writing and imagery jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
No Janet its not water that will cool this off Mark...every storm needs to be ridden...come ride with me |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Enjoyed this storm of passionate thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes...yes and yes...egads I like this alot... perfect poetic passion, ( serenity exits, purrring...) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I've lifted anchor and hoisted my sail. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...you are quite the sailor yourself Serenity...glad I could get you purring mark...you know you are the Captain of my ship |
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