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Is This the Mover? Help!
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Is This the Mover? Help! |
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Dom Mart Member
since 1999-08-17
Posts 164Florida |
Crates and cartons line each wall, With a passage through the center. Send some men who are lean and small, Who'll have a chance to enter. Besides chairs and chests to haul away, We have items we can't do without-- A winepress we may use some day, A taxidermied rainbow trout, Three houses meant for purple martins, Eight dozen unread magazines, Electric blenders, still in cartons, Meant for mixing salad greens, Assorted this, assorted that, Boxes and bags of bric-a-brac, Clothes we wore when we were fat, Impossible to neatly stack. So hurry with your biggest van And take this stuff without delay, The way I feel, I won't complain If you lose it all along the way. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, you got a chuckle out of me here Dom Mart ... just finished this fiasco myself! (and thought the same thing) LOL Loved this poem!  Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-03-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dom~ Adorably done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
This is Great! So well written! I understand completely. Wow...I hate packing and moving! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
enjoyed.. nicely written. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
hehe. Well done, Dom. I never go anywhere without my taxidermied rainbow trout, either! |
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