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Open Poetry #8

4th of july challenge

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

0 posted 2000-07-03 03:51 AM

Red is for blood
Embracing humanity
Dedicated to freedom

White is for souls
Hanging their lives
In the line of duty
Transforming opposition
Energy into peace

Blue is for heaven
Lifting our heart in
Unison
Experiencing gratefulness

monique

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-07-03 07:42 AM

Monique~
Well-done !
What a great acrostic !
Challenge more than met !
Happy 4th !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

2 posted 2000-07-03 10:37 AM

Monique,
I like acrostics, and you've done well here on a good theme! David

"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)

Poertree
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since 1999-11-05

Posts 1359
UK

3 posted 2000-07-04 04:22 AM

Even tho i'm a Brit I suppose i have to admire the cleverness of this monique .... but "Britain rules the Waves" ..he heh ...
well done

and btw ..nice to see you after all this time ~smile~

philip

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

4 posted 2000-07-04 05:31 AM

Great poem, well done, Happy Independence day or what ever day the forth of July celabrates ( sorry I am British ) . Have a drink for me anyway .
L.of.L. Tom .

Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

5 posted 2000-07-04 12:28 PM

Well I am french canadian but been here so long I had to say something about a country who accepted me with open arms.
Thank you for your comments.

monique

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

6 posted 2000-07-05 08:45 AM

Excellent poem monique ... I like the format you've used in this one ... I'm sure the U.S. is happy to have you take part in their celebration ... Canadas'loss

Rex

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

7 posted 2000-07-05 07:40 PM

O Rex!
I have a lot of growing to do
It is good to see you back!

monique

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