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Moonlight Sonata in Haiku
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Moonlight Sonata in Haiku |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Moonlight Sonata in Haiku (while listening to Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata) Mooncast shadows pry Pastoral Sonata plays Lovers softly moan Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful and serene jamie perfect... I cant do these little gems... I'm too long winded  lovely work take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOOHHHHHHHH Jamie....so much passion in so few words..... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ Enjoyed this lovely Haiku. Aren't they fun to do? Senyru For JanetMarie~  Windy words do blow Thoughts of you across the page Laughing in delight ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Dancing to soft tune~ Sonata resonating~ Moon glows upon us Excellent haiku,both Prometheus and Marge |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie, WOW the passion just spills over this page, it is gorgeous! Well Done my friend Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
Lovers sprinkled with moonbeams is a many splendoured thing. mmmm.... Hugss <**> |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
A gorgeous image, Jamie!! Moonlit lovers...mmmmm!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Prometheus, Well done enjoyed. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jamie~ Wow! So much said....with so few words! I just love it.( I wish I could write a Haiku ) -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Truly Love is a many splendored thing. Thanks for the positive feedback. It has not been so long that I can't recall.. "the way it was" jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
very nice Jamie! With just a touch of sexuality. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Siren's Song Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 17 |
So Intense.. wonderful haiku |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL... HEY MARGIE....DID YOU JUST POETICALLY SAY IM FULL OF HOT AIR LOL THANKS FOR THE POEM SWEETIE...ITS LOVELY enjoyed another read of yours Jamie ... even better this time of night later-sensual-Haiku-gator jm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Makes me want to pull out my CD...and don't think I won't when the opportunity presents itself...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A delightful thought provoking little gem Lovely Jamie Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Everyone has been so generous; Thank YOU. Please let me know when you tire of these. I am afraid I have more....lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
Tire ...oh no... More please.. Hugss <**> |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Thanks Tanga,,, I am reminded of something my mother used to say - "don't encourage him"...lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovely. Moonlight Sonata is one of my favorites ~netswan |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
Looking into your eyes Jamie, and whispering ...did you always listen to what mom said? Eyes sparkling ** hugss <**> |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey - I don't realy like haikus as a general rule - but I have to say, this is great!! It evokes, I guess, a soft, gentle atmosphere... (Oh - and I got your message...thinking about the answer currently!!! lol) K |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Prometheus.......... Loved your Haiku much.. You have a wonderful touch.. Your words fill my heart.. Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jamie Encouragement, do receive this from us to you encouragement, more I, too have pled a troth to Moonlight Sonata and when I dig through my archives, you'll get a special e-mail! Wonderful! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Oh James! This is so sensual! Keep'em coming and don't even think that even for a moment that we're getting tired of these. I especially loved this one. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Netswan--One of my favorites also; thanks Tanga- I know momma would never lie to me..lol Severn- I am so happy that you could overlook you rule from me...lol---still thinking??/ Sunny1- Thank you! you are sweet. sunshine- Thanks, and I will be sure to watch for it. kat- You are too kind. Thank you very much. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
Jamie, whispering softly. I know that your momma would never lie to you BUT did you listen?? Hugss <**> |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
how funny is that- I was just listening to that piece when I found your poem...it does describe it well--good work "We have all these galaxies inside of us. And if we don't enter those in art, then I don't understand the point in doing anything."-Sam Shepard |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is really beautiful. One day I will attempt one of these but for now they are out of my reach. Loved this and its emotion. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
jennie may--Now you must go play the Twilight Zone theme---lol Thanks, glad you could enjoy. Mark- Thanks for the kind words. I just try to think in images and remember emotions. Go for it! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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