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OLIAS
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0 posted 2000-07-02 03:09 PM


Dusk
5-7-5

Tree stands accusing,
Skys precarious balance,
Hard, topples twilight.

Olias


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1 posted 2000-07-03 12:35 PM


Olias~
A lovely, well-executed Haiku.
Enjoyed the vision.

Twilight surrenders
Morning comes in full glory
Ah, day has begun


~*Marge*~


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OLIAS
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Pearl city Iowa
2 posted 2000-07-04 10:31 AM


Thanks Marge, and thank you for the dawn, best time of the day.
Regards
Olias

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