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Contrary Waltz |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa 
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Contrary Waltz (a poem in 3/4) Multitudes of misconceptions, They hang on my brow, I want to pick you up and hold you, But don't know quite how, Your changing atitude astounds me, With every new day, I think that just when I have found you, You push me away, Smother me with your affections, When I think we're through, A roller coaster of emotions, I'm lost, what to do? Forever must we keep revolving, Lifes dance floor in doubt, If this is all there is between us, I'll sit this one out! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh i relate too well to this one... very well written Olias.. suberb rhyme and cadence excellent work. take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Ahh...the rollercoaster ride of emotions...been there, done that...got off the ride. You wrote of the emotions well, and the poem flowed nicely...I like! Marie~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
J.M. Thankyou for posting, I was trying to marry music with poetry, I'm still not compfortable with the art, but I'm learning, Thankyou for your support it means alot to me. M. I'm don't know wether I'm happy or not that this brought back memories, but thanks for the comments, as long as you liked it I've decided I'm happy Take care my friends Olias |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I love the 3/4 time reference. One steps forward while the other steps back. Poignant, an excellent poem. Corinne |
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