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Wherever the River Flows
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Wherever the River Flows |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Wherever the River Flows Wherever the river winds, I want to go Around every bend with the force of the flow Down every cascade just tumbling free Til it reaches the mouth and flows into the sea Wherever the breezes blow I want to fly Along with the currents of air drifting by Lifting me higher to places unknown Where the eagle and falcon have never yet flown Wherever you ramble I just want to ride To be in your company right by your side If you float down a river or soar into space I’ll be there beside you wherever the place I’ll climb any mountain, I’ll swim any stream I’ll ride any highway to follow your dream Wherever you wander, whatever you do For my greatest dream is just being with you Elizabeth Santos |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I can tell by the cadence of this one that your heart was on high. Beautifully crafted work Elizabeth. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a piece of great beauty, Liz!! Such style and grace as only you possess... The words dance like the wind and flow like that river. Wonderful!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
graceful, eloquent and perfect as is the poet  lovely Liz, take care, jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
What an uplifting song to experience on this bright sunny morning. Exceptional as always. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie~ Joy is mine - found within your rhyme. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Elizabeth, this is just sooooo beautiful! I love it!  Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I know the feeling. Great poem. Love Sy |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
This is great...another work of art. Everything just flows so smoothly, like water down a stream. Marie~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Liz, This is excellent... regards, sudhir |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, I am at a loss for words ... beutiful I guess is the closest thing I can say, I loved it . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Could someone throw me a rope ...PLEASE???? I got lost on this river Liz!!! Excellent writing as always |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Could someone throw me a rope ...PLEASE???? I got lost on this river Liz!!! Excellent writing as always |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Liz - very sweet poem - full of longing, and promise. Whenever I think of you, I remember the person I met at Mike's who could inspire these sentiments in others. |
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