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Mystery of friendship

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 06-30-2000 07:11 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Mystery of friendship

What did I expect from you anyway and your zero tolerance heart?
Perhaps just one small iota of a real life chance
to feel like my hope and sincerity
would have the slightest opportunity
to reach out to your heart
and possibly possess the desired key
to unlock each and every mystery
so I  may enter the vestibule of your heart.
Cause I really truly honestly would like to know
if all my hopes and desires for a friendship
will be lost within the mysterious chambers of your heart
or will my hopes blend within yours to create a warm creative flow
in which every precious beat of our hearts shall encourage our friendship to build and grow.

Jameslee@June30,2000

© Copyright 2000 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 06-30-2000 07:15 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This is so beautifully expressed James!
Truly genuine feelings come through in
reading ... I do hope you find the key!  
Wonderful writing!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Marina
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2 posted 06-30-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

You always manage to express yourself so well my friend.  

Marina



It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


JamesMichael
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3 posted 06-30-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Kit and Marina I appreciated your warm remarks.  James
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4 posted 06-30-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

James~ I hope who you wrote this for is worth it as it sounds like He/She isn't being very nice to you. Great poem by the way!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Lone Wolf
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5 posted 06-30-2000 10:22 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

James,

I hope you get the response you are looking for here.  Powerful thoughts and words.  Love the formatting too.  

Best Wishes,
LW


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.
--William Wordsworth
CocoBaci
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6 posted 07-01-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

.. the mysterious chambers of your heart ..
James, the expression here is quite unique
I liked the flow and how you speak
From heart not mind
The way it should be
Most of the time

Coco
JamesMichael
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7 posted 07-01-2000 06:56 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Sea actually this is a woman I am falling in love with and if I am not falling in love I would like to fall in love with her....but at the right moment..and together...so we have had discussions on love and friendship and I have offered her a friendship and she is offering me a friendship and we'll see where the road leads..and right now I'm just sitting here watching the world go by...John Lennon.
LoneWolf I hope I get the response I am looking for also..I love the way she held on to my hand tonight...and fool that I am I ask her if she would still like to work after we were married..and then I had to say oh I mean if we get married.  I truly am trying for only a friendship right now but that doesn't mean I don't want her to fall in love with me.
Thank you Coco this really did come from my heart and I am expressing frustration and desires...when you have already decided you really like someone you can only hope they are coming to the same conclusion..if not expectations can be shattered.  We did both agree that love cannot be forced, manipulated, or rushed....I appreciate all the warm comments...James
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


8 posted 07-01-2000 07:02 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Beautiful, Jameslee.
I truly hope you find the happiness you deserve.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
JamesMichael
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9 posted 07-01-2000 06:18 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Lizzie I feel like this is my year..I hope this is the year...James
brian madden
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10 posted 07-01-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

A wonderfully written poem, I hope that she did decide to let you in and share tha magic and mystery of friendship. excellent poem, James.

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry
Meadowmuse
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11 posted 07-01-2000 06:44 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

"the vestibule of your heart"
...so eloquently stated, James. I, too, hope this is your year.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

JamesMichael
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12 posted 07-04-2000 08:13 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thanks Brian and Claire...me and Lena shared lunch today and talked lots of stories and our friendship is growing and I am very happy...James
tracie66
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13 posted 07-04-2000 08:19 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

WOW James this is absolutely beautiful... a most tender and soulful poem...I loved it  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

JamesMichael
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14 posted 07-06-2000 05:51 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Tracie for your wonderful comments...James
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15 posted 04-30-2005 01:55 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

It wasn't my year...James
 
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