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Within Your Rhyme
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Within Your Rhyme ~*Marge Tindal*~ I smiled amidst the babbling brook Heard the birds sweet song Thanks for the trip within your rhyme and for asking me along Well within your pages beautiful scenes are kept with some so very tender I viewed them and I wept I looked at the all memories you'd placed on view I got a truer picture of why you are you I hope I didn't intrude you were an open book Thanks for allowing me inside to take a look |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, Marge, this has to be one of your best yet, which is saying something as I enjoy all your poetry as it is bouncy, simple, fun and deep all at the same time . I know not how you manage it, it is a true talent . I think it is definately bookable . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully written Marge ... it is so much like "taking a peek inside" all these wonderful people isn't it? Thanks for letting us peek inside on your end too! I so enjoy your many uplifting poems. Wonderful writing!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
How beautiful is this??? Simply wonderful Marge, and oh so true. And I too thank you for all of the lovely "peeks" you have given us. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AngelSwing~ I do enjoy what I do ... thanks for noticing. Kit~ I am so glad to invite all into my heart for a view. Thank you. BSC~ I do so appreciate your thoughts. It is a pleasure for me to look into the hearts of fellow-poets. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Marge, This is just a simply wonderful poem....and I agree your poetry is both simple and deep....so much is said within your few words that you pen in each of your poems,,,,I do enjoy reading your poetry...and this should be edited to submit for the book!!  < !signature-->Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 06-30-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful Marge, really beautiful. "monuments put from pen to paper turns me into a gutless wonder" Manic street preachers |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Marge, I tell ya you just gotta Take a look at my sonata And you'll really know me well Peeking at my villanelle.  Just grab a cloud and perch upon it Gander at my heart-felt sonnet All these things I write for you Ballads, epics and haikus. You'll see how my passion rages Just to have you on my pages And we would make two perfect lovers If you would come between my covers! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JulieAnn~ Hon, thank you. I am so pleased to give pleasure through my writing. BrianM~ I do thank you. I glanced at your sonata So what'a ?? Peeked at your villanelle ... excuse me ... what the .... ? The sonnet was a dilly. The epic a little silly ... I haven't seen you Haiku ... You DO ? But, oh I heard the ballads that you sing in passionate phrases. So crawl under my covers, baby ... Let's see what inspiration that raises !  We ARE bad ! Aren't we ? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Beautiful work my friend. Thank you for the peek into your heart of gold. It was awesome!! Nice writing. LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Beautiful work my friend. Thank you for the peek into your heart of gold. It was awesome!! Nice writing. LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Beautiful work my friend. Thank you for the peek into your heart of gold. It was awesome!! Nice writing. LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
You're a treasure Marge |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--always love the peeks into your poetry, it is so LOVEly....and your reply to that scamp Balladeer...should put him in his poetic place He is cute though, isn't he... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Most lovely dear Marge Thanks for allowing us to enjoy this one...Ta Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely, Marge!!! Every peek into your heart is a precious treasure. What a heart of silver and gold it is!!! Love ya! Love and hugs, Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Thanks for the reply reply reply (Ceres *burped* last evening) Now why couldn't that happen on one where VOTES matter ??? CocoBaci~ And you are just too kind. Martie~ Gosh, thanks. I do adore that 'scamp'. Tracie~ Thanks for being here to share it with. Lil' Lizzie~ Peek-A-Boo Back at you ! Love you gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge....here's a big Balladeer salute for a wonderful response!!!! ROTFLMAOAAWW!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My Balladeer~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Well, Marge, as usual your talent amazes me. I think this may be one of my favorites of yours. You're a wonderful poet and you always have a kind response to everything I write and that is much appreciated. Thank you for letting me take a peek inside your heart and to see what wonderful rhymes reside within. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Marge! Denise |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Marge~ Wonderful!!! I just LOVE your poems so much! ~Kelly ~Kellsue Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Gosh ... I hope you know how good you make me feel ! I just LOVE to share poetry. Denise~ My friend - I look in my heart and find you there always. KellSue~ And I LOVE sharing ! Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
what brilliant sentiments...isnt that why we all love poetry--the opportunity to have a glimpse into the divergent worlds of other people,bridging up our differences and getting to know one another? enjoyable read..moi think even you have outclassed yourself this time |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ My sentiments exactly on sharing the poetry of others ... what a joy it is to leaf through the thoughts of other poets. Thanks for the reply, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge.. thanks for coming into my open book and thanks for inviting me into yours. I know I am so much better off knowing the beauty of your words exist in this tumultous old world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thank YOU for sharing a peek into your heart. I'm so thankful to the wonderful poets here for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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